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Towadeeni (you love me) by Arabian Oud {R}



Towadeeni ! You said you love me,
But today you behave strangely,
As though we aren’t anything special,
You treat me so casually,
I don’t seem to understand you,
Each time I confront you,
You say I am being too silly,
Bas, your actions don’t follow your words,
Is this love I ask myself?
You vanish without informing,
Keep me worried all along,
Maybe you enjoy this attention,
But it ain’t no fun believe me,
Once,
You see me talk to another guy,
I notice anger on your face,
You puzzle me every time,
Coz you never treat me special,
Yet are jealous coz I stray,
Towadeeni! Don’t make me laugh now,
Love ain’t a penny, you keep flipping,
I waited for long but now I am leaving,
If not today then bacher (tomoro) you will love me,
And I am sure of that,
Coz ur gona realise,
What you lost was something precious
No one aint’ gonna take your attitude,
I took it for long, coz I loved ya..
Bas now its time to leave ,
Till you realise what love is..

Note: Image of a model for Abu Haleeqa







Comments

Anonymous said…
nicely written

i like the story you are telling, and the wy you present it. Nice mixture of arabic and english. very natural =) good work
11:14 am
Arabianperfume said…
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5:40 pm
Anonymous said…
Oh My God
I just loved every single word you just wrote. It includes meaningful strong words that makes the story as if its a real one. By using arabic words u made the doubt comes to my mind that u have arabic origins ^__*
PEACE
6:09 pm
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6:49 pm
Arabianperfume said…
Amel,

thankyou for ur kind comments.. very sweet of u sis..
6:50 pm
Arabianperfume said…
Mohammed,

thankyou , very kind of u to compliment my poem.. I am glad u like my poem...

I appreciate ur kindness as ever.

:)
6:51 pm
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