Skip to main content

Towadeeni (you love me) by Arabian Oud {R}



Towadeeni ! You said you love me,
But today you behave strangely,
As though we aren’t anything special,
You treat me so casually,
I don’t seem to understand you,
Each time I confront you,
You say I am being too silly,
Bas, your actions don’t follow your words,
Is this love I ask myself?
You vanish without informing,
Keep me worried all along,
Maybe you enjoy this attention,
But it ain’t no fun believe me,
Once,
You see me talk to another guy,
I notice anger on your face,
You puzzle me every time,
Coz you never treat me special,
Yet are jealous coz I stray,
Towadeeni! Don’t make me laugh now,
Love ain’t a penny, you keep flipping,
I waited for long but now I am leaving,
If not today then bacher (tomoro) you will love me,
And I am sure of that,
Coz ur gona realise,
What you lost was something precious
No one aint’ gonna take your attitude,
I took it for long, coz I loved ya..
Bas now its time to leave ,
Till you realise what love is..

Note: Image of a model for Abu Haleeqa







Comments

Anonymous said…
nicely written

i like the story you are telling, and the wy you present it. Nice mixture of arabic and english. very natural =) good work
11:14 am
Arabianperfume said…
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
5:40 pm
Anonymous said…
Oh My God
I just loved every single word you just wrote. It includes meaningful strong words that makes the story as if its a real one. By using arabic words u made the doubt comes to my mind that u have arabic origins ^__*
PEACE
6:09 pm
Arabianperfume said…
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
6:49 pm
Arabianperfume said…
Amel,

thankyou for ur kind comments.. very sweet of u sis..
6:50 pm
Arabianperfume said…
Mohammed,

thankyou , very kind of u to compliment my poem.. I am glad u like my poem...

I appreciate ur kindness as ever.

:)
6:51 pm
Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

حامل الهوى تعب. أبو نواس. ( The One Burdened With Passion Is Weary. Abu Nuwas [d. 814 AD]) on Arabian Oud {R}

حامل الهوى تعب ـــ يستخفه الطرب If he cries, it is right for him [to do so] - what he has is no game. إن بكى يحق له ـــ ليس ما به لعب Whenever one cause [of pain] comes to an end - from you, [another] cause returns to me. كلما انقضى سبب ـــ منك عاد لي سبب You laugh obliviously - as the lover weeps. تضحكين لاهية ـــ والمحب ينتحب You marvel at my sickness - my health is the marvel. تعجبين من سقمي ـــ صحتي هي العجب
Post a Comment
Read more

Whenever you are with me... by Arabian Oud {R}

Whenever you are with me, No matter how hard life gets, I always have you to make me feel loved, You whisper in my ears, Words of encouragement, Everytime I fall, Your love holds me back, Look at this home, We built with so much love and hard work, Where did you disappear one day? And leave me all alone in a place we called 'home' You left me in an endless darkness, With no hope, with tears, with regrets, Was our love so weak? That it couldn't stand the storm? That it couldn't stand these hard tests? Was our love so fake? That instead of holding each other, We run away from each other, And act as if we no longer care, And act as if we are deaf to each other's voice, Act as if we can live without each other, Whenever you are with me, In my thoughts, my loneliness disappears, You are my other half, that completes me, Come back and complete our story, Make this house a home again, Fill it with life and happiness, The love our souls dream for, The love we prayed for.. N...
Post a Comment
Read more

Unbeliever in love - June 2006 poem

I was once a believer in love, but now I am an unbeliever in love, I was so deeply smitten by his smile, but now I wonder what drove me to him? I thought love meant eternal BLISS, but then I realised it was plain HELL, Prancing around the trees like a child, I seemed to lose my innocence in love, Love, you followed my shadow everywhere, And then you entered my blood and then my soul, You crept into my alley in the dark night, Then stole my sleep and hypnotised me, I thought it was so special, 'true love' But it was nothing but a gud 'Time pass' for you, Driving me to insanity and sleepless nights, Then stealing away my dreams and peace, You vanish in the midst of the night, I thought you understood me, you was special, But it was all a charade you put up, You behave all sweet and innocent infront of me, But inside thee are full of betrayal and evil, Now I am an unbeliever in love, Thankyou for waking me up, Coz I can see I was lucky to walk away lonely, I am deaf to the...
Post a Comment
Read more